magazine cover

This is my magazine cover that I created during 2013 at Kapaa middle school for GT. I used brush layers copy and pasted the layer and much more in and out of photoshop. I think I also think I could have made my subtitles a bit more see through.Otherwise I think I did A decent job on it. What do you think of it? I put a lot of time and effort into it.I think this might go into my Artist portfolio.